Lineboy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Treat"]

Storyline Good, Animation Standardly Bad

The only good thing about this animation is the storyline. The trick or treaters walk cycle is wierd, his legs keep swapping over, lol. I'm not too keen on your style either.

SaltyPeach responds:

Hey, at least I put effort in to it.

[Rampage: The sticks' tale]

Stickmen boring

I'm tired of watching stick men animations...it's like, how lazy can you get? make them have a body, make us understant what face exprssions they have, make it more believable but i rate you for doing it anyway because I know animating take long but I know you can do a lot better.

TheReno responds:

This is a Pivot Animation. For those who dont know, Pivot is an exclusive stickman FBF only animation software. Which means that I can only use sticks, and only animate Frame by frame. So I cant help you with the whole body thing man.

[Poop This Time Around]

Dat was Good

I loved tha animation even though they were easy techniques to accomplish in Flash. The reason why I gave diz animation a 5 because I can tell dat u put a lot of work into diz wid just a week to hand it in, i rate u. You chose the corresct music for the style of the animation, which included tunes from edward scissor hands and the nightmare before christmas, memba dem tunes bak in da days, dem 2nes r da 1s dat u can dream with, lol. The ending was random, dat's why it was funny and the animals laugh gave me joke. I wood like to see more animations from you, peace.

rizilmine responds:

Hey thanks. I know the techniques are pretty simplistic. The class I took was just an intro class, so it was the first time I ever did flash. Thanks for the review.

[remembering mikey]

Yes, your work is interesting.

Yo, sup? Hey, i rate u for your rotascoping at the beginning, hardly no animation dat i seen has dat. an then u started to kill it when the animation started but then it started to get funny. I rate u with the photos coming out the machine. Very clever how u had different reactions to diff. enviroments so ur using different types of media. So overall I liked it because ur work is the kind of thing that im interested in doing, Good advice, chek out Lecielestbleu's work, he uses pixel/photography animation with animals to give u more ideas, that person inspired me, chek it out on iz site wich is, wwwlecielestbleucom

I have done a short joke animation of ma dad break dancing
(for a man of his age) lol, with photography. Ima add u to ma fav.

Peace

greghatesevry1 responds:

thanx for the review and the link. i like rotascoping but it takes alot of time.

[Swimming With Pigs]

Im dissapointed this time

It wasn't as funny as the gladiator one, althought it has the outstanding graphics, that don't change. This animation didn't make me laugh, you could think of something way better than this.

dunkbd responds:

No worries Lineboy. I did this one way before 'Gladiator', and I agree it's not as funny. I just thought I'd get some more of my Flash work up there due to the positive response from the 1st one.