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Very Touching

It's a very touching story, your animation is clean which is really good. I advise you to look at another animation called 'The Pianot', I think it's on newgrounds and youtube. That animation really excellent aswell and maybe that could give you more ideas to make other touching stories aswell...keep up the good work :)

Foxcato responds:

Thank you very much.
I watched the movie and really enjoyed it. Thanks for telling me about it:)
I shall do my best.
By the way, thanks for adding Like Poetry to your favourites^_^

Storyline Good, Animation Standardly Bad

The only good thing about this animation is the storyline. The trick or treaters walk cycle is wierd, his legs keep swapping over, lol. I'm not too keen on your style either.

SaltyPeach responds:

Hey, at least I put effort in to it.

Stickmen boring

I'm tired of watching stick men animations...it's like, how lazy can you get? make them have a body, make us understant what face exprssions they have, make it more believable but i rate you for doing it anyway because I know animating take long but I know you can do a lot better.

TheReno responds:

This is a Pivot Animation. For those who dont know, Pivot is an exclusive stickman FBF only animation software. Which means that I can only use sticks, and only animate Frame by frame. So I cant help you with the whole body thing man.

I know how newgrounds work

Yes, the majority of a the newground users know how the whole thing works, you don't need to remind us how to keep our creations on the site and the animation looks easy to make even though I wouldn't think of making anything like that, show us your talent, show us you imagination, make animations that tell a story and then you might get lots of people to notice you.

Kyothine responds:

I don't care about what the majority of Newgrounders know, I care about whether or not this movie was enjoyable to you. You didn't comment on anything other than the concept. The animation looks easy, well that's fine, but did it look good? Was it hard on the eyes? Did you understand what was going on? How about the sound?

You didn't state any of this in your review. I won't mark it as abusive, but it certainly isn't helpful.

Dat was Good

I loved tha animation even though they were easy techniques to accomplish in Flash. The reason why I gave diz animation a 5 because I can tell dat u put a lot of work into diz wid just a week to hand it in, i rate u. You chose the corresct music for the style of the animation, which included tunes from edward scissor hands and the nightmare before christmas, memba dem tunes bak in da days, dem 2nes r da 1s dat u can dream with, lol. The ending was random, dat's why it was funny and the animals laugh gave me joke. I wood like to see more animations from you, peace.

rizilmine responds:

Hey thanks. I know the techniques are pretty simplistic. The class I took was just an intro class, so it was the first time I ever did flash. Thanks for the review.

Yes, your work is interesting.

Yo, sup? Hey, i rate u for your rotascoping at the beginning, hardly no animation dat i seen has dat. an then u started to kill it when the animation started but then it started to get funny. I rate u with the photos coming out the machine. Very clever how u had different reactions to diff. enviroments so ur using different types of media. So overall I liked it because ur work is the kind of thing that im interested in doing, Good advice, chek out Lecielestbleu's work, he uses pixel/photography animation with animals to give u more ideas, that person inspired me, chek it out on iz site wich is, wwwlecielestbleucom

I have done a short joke animation of ma dad break dancing
(for a man of his age) lol, with photography. Ima add u to ma fav.

Peace

greghatesevry1 responds:

thanx for the review and the link. i like rotascoping but it takes alot of time.

Im dissapointed this time

It wasn't as funny as the gladiator one, althought it has the outstanding graphics, that don't change. This animation didn't make me laugh, you could think of something way better than this.

dunkbd responds:

No worries Lineboy. I did this one way before 'Gladiator', and I agree it's not as funny. I just thought I'd get some more of my Flash work up there due to the positive response from the 1st one.

Yo, sup peeps? Diz iz Lineboy and im coming back with a bang. Hope you'll like my animations, peace? !!!Que Viva Colombia!!!

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